tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21353439.post2073619427288532154..comments2023-10-28T06:16:41.152-05:00Comments on Hip Suburban White Guy: Rewriting Ad CopyXavier Onassishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01345787343828318445noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21353439.post-47682433007476672722010-09-16T06:09:14.350-05:002010-09-16T06:09:14.350-05:00Hey, nice site you have here! Keep up the excellen...Hey, nice site you have here! Keep up the excellent work!<br /><a href="http://mobilehomeforsale.com.au/" rel="nofollow">mobile home sale</a>thanvirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11303023326695501844noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21353439.post-43584554348714026202009-08-21T15:47:11.370-05:002009-08-21T15:47:11.370-05:00Car port for 2 cars should show 2 cars, not 4.
Ju...Car port for 2 cars should show 2 cars, not 4.<br /><br />Just my $0.02.Josh Peckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14441603398326489906noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21353439.post-84968449249751641662009-08-16T08:05:02.416-05:002009-08-16T08:05:02.416-05:00lot rent? Good luck to them as far as selling it g...lot rent? Good luck to them as far as selling it goes. When you can buy a real stick house on a real foundation at bargain rates, most people arent going to buy a trailer house, which are a bitch to finance, plus pay lot fees. They might want to consider owner finance or renting it.Mark Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11832942533819391503noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21353439.post-89071934165249975922009-08-15T15:38:56.794-05:002009-08-15T15:38:56.794-05:00That phone number doesn't work, must've be...That phone number doesn't work, must've been a typo.FletcherDodgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00870340800475532887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21353439.post-84350387400478275332009-08-15T12:09:27.307-05:002009-08-15T12:09:27.307-05:00"and cathedral ceilings available!" You ..."and cathedral ceilings available!" You may want to restructure that sentence. It sounds like the cathedral ceilings are an option.Spyderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10469832764480816567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21353439.post-5490714582329612972009-08-15T09:09:34.086-05:002009-08-15T09:09:34.086-05:00That's a pretty nice place. Especially for a ...That's a pretty nice place. Especially for a mobile home. You should also add if it is in a tornado free zone or not. :PPoodleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04058132060541145052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21353439.post-19189797495523793132009-08-15T07:56:25.635-05:002009-08-15T07:56:25.635-05:00JOOLS - Good points. I have those pictures, not s...JOOLS - Good points. I have those pictures, not sure why I didn't include them. <br /><br />The mobile home park is in Independence, fairly large and includes a swimming pool and a fishing pond. I should definitely include those details.<br /><br />Also ceiling fans throughout.<br /><br />Thanks!Xavier Onassishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01345787343828318445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21353439.post-4351956669216302922009-08-15T07:03:33.891-05:002009-08-15T07:03:33.891-05:00Pretty good ad but I'd want to see pictures of...Pretty good ad but I'd want to see pictures of the living room and master bedroom.<br /><br />Also, describe the location of the mobile home park. What city? Is the mobile home park big, small, nice, well maintained, etc.?I Travel for JOOLShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07348834982890831188noreply@blogger.com